My weakest essay was the personal narrative. My essay did not meet the page requirements, even though I thought what I wrote would be sufficient. Also, I assumed the dialogue was optional because I misread the assignment. My writing was also very boring because I talked too much and said things like you told me not to. An example of this was when I described my arrival at the park. “About 1.3 miles into my usual run, I normally pass Sherril Brook City Park. However, this time it was open earlier than usual. I decided to enter. My sentences were very short and precise, which is why I think it sounds so boring to