However, after using the Writer's Diet diagnostic tool, I was concerned to learn that my first attempt had been called a "heart attack." He pointed out errors such as “unnecessary words” (e.g. this, that, there), as well as my too many verb counts. Researching my mistakes through textbooks and sites like Paper Rater (http://www.paperrater.com/) has given me deeper insight into my ability to readjust my writing techniques. Through these sites, I was able to realize the importance of drafting, revising, and editing to produce a more academic style of writing. I am aware that my writing skills are not always correct or adequate, and this becomes evident as I research and point out my own flaws. Writers Diet provided me with a brief breakdown of areas I should focus on to improve. However, after scoring fairly well on almost all aspects assessed, my only major problem was with "unnecessary words" and my number of verbs. Through this entire unit so far, including the research done to reflect on my personal writing abilities, I am able to identify areas for improvement and discover strategies to implement.